1. The thesis statement is that passing classes can be difficult but it can be done. I believe it is close to the authors thesis statement. It is stated in my own words.
2. I included all major parts of the essay.
3. I had about a paragraph for each major point.
4. My organizational pattern followed the order of which it was in the essay.
5. The authors thesis statement was a little hard for me to figure out.
6. Fixed errors in final draft.
7. Sentence structure is a bit wordy at times, but tried to fix most.
8. Used 3 or 4 quotes
9. Essay is written in third person.
10. Paper is 3 pages long and 1" margins.
Morgan Chiles
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